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©2009 *The-8th-Sin
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Close up photo of a delicious chocolate parfait I had the pleasure of eating several times at a Japanese Denny's, namely one in Ikebukuro.

I really wish they'd serve parfait here in Sydney. They're much more delicious than sundaes in my opinion. There's a place in Market City actually, Poporo, that has them, come to think of it.

Critiques


:iconsanddragon:
A great shot it makes me want some chocolate ice cream.
Since you ask for a critique here is what I see.
Vision: you have laid they shot out well by showing just enough of the ice cream to make it fit nicely in either a "rule of thirds" composition the "Golden mean" composition.
Originality: it's hard to say how original a picture is but since I have not taken any good pictures of ice cream I'd say it's original.
Technique: I wish there was a little more depth of field, it's too bad that mint leaves are not in focus. maybe if you you f/8 or f/11 you would've been able to achieve enough depth of field and not too much.
Impact: I wish you could have gotten a dark background to come all the way down and the picture so that ice cream glass of stands out better from the background and create a greater impact.
I hope you find these comments helpful, we are all trying to be better photographers.
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:icontaintedlove90:
This is such a beautiful photo! The colours and lighting is perfect... and it's making me really crave ice cream =)
:iconkhantinka:
Haha wow thats fantastic!

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:iconxmadyax:
Mmm that looks yummy :love:

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:iconthe-8th-sin:
I think I had around 5 while I was there...:blush:

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:iconthe-8th-sin:
Aw thanks! I think those things were a bit of a fluke (the colours and lighting). This was actually just a happy snap that turned out to look pretty cool. :D

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:iconxmadyax:
Ohhh noo I'm so jealous!!))))

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:iconlramirez:
What can I say... it looks delicious! :P I like that you could capture the frozen details... almost in the center of the picture - in the direction of the left bottom corner. I think the same picture would be more interesting with a purple/magenta background.
:iconthe-8th-sin:
Ooh, that could be an interesting look. I might see if i can do something to that effect with it.

Thanks for the tip! :D

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Canon EOS 350D DIGITAL
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Jan 16, 2009, 9:51:32 PM

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